2012年11月13日星期二

雅思写作高分句型:陈述句表达25例


1.她开始谈起自己的男友时才来了劲头。
She came alive as she started talking about her boyfriend.
2.我知道你不喜欢他,但他也有可用之处。
I know you don’t like him, but he has his uses.
3.如果这些症状没有消失,马上给我打电话。
If the symptoms persist, don’t hesitate to call me.
4.你别总是这样跟着我好不好?
Will you stop following me around?
5.别提她胖了—她对此很敏感。
Don’t mention that she’s put on weight—she’s very sensitive about it.
6.我同情地盯着那位在路边乞讨的老太太看了许久,心想她的孩子是不是知道自己的母亲在过着这样一种悲惨的生活呢?
I looked on sympathetically at the old lady begging at roadside, wondering if her children
knew that their mother was leading such a miserable life.
7.她挖空心思刁难我们。
She went out of her way to make things difficult for us.
8.要减肥还是吃巧克力,你得选其一,这可是个鱼与熊掌的问题。
You’ll have to decide whether you want to lose weight or eat chocolates and you can’t have it both ways!
9.这几次谈判的成功为释放人质扫清了道路。
The success of these talks has cleared the way for the release of the hostages.
10.当你游览上海的时候,首先看到的东西之一就是坐落在黄浦江东岸的“东方明珠电视塔”—那座可以从很远就能看到的塔,也是世界第四高的建筑物和上海市的象征。
When you visit Shanghai, one of the first things you will see is the Oriental Pearl TV Tower standing on the east bank of Huangpu River—the famous tower which can be seen from far away, the forth highest building in the world and the symbol of the city.
11.如果你要是没有给我传错信息的话,我就不会跟他吵架了。
If you had not passed on the wrong message to me, I would not have quarreled with him.
12.他很少外出。
He rarely, if ever, goes out.
13.我难得享受到如此宜人的静谧。
Rarely have I enjoyed such soothing tranquility.
14.我起先在电话里都没有听出你的声音。
I failed to recognize your voice on the phone at first.
15.在上高速之前你最好把四个轮胎再检查一遍。一旦有一个爆了,你也就完了。
You’d better have your four tyres checked once again before you drive onto the express way.
Should one burst, you would get killed.
16.很多外国人对中国历史的了解令我们自感惭愧。
Many foreigners’ knowledge of Chinese history puts us to shame.
17.他没有像我希望的那样前来乞求我原谅他的粗鲁态度,而是表现的好像什么也没发生过似的。
He did not come to beg me to excuse his rude manner as I hoped he would, but acted as if
nothing had happened.
18.如果你试图逃税,那一旦被发现,你就有被处以重额罚款的风险。
If you try to evade paying your taxes, you risk being fined heavily once found out.
19.虽则已成为上海的名人了,但他宁愿像过去一样不去引人注目。
He is now one of Shanghai’s notables—but he prefers to remain out of the limelight.
20.我的一位同事特爱出风头。
One of my colleagues is very fond of the limelight.
21.晚会上,他抢了Mary的风头。
He stole the limelight of the party from Mary.
22.仪器设备总是经过仔细消毒以防感染。
Equipment is always carefully sterilized as a precaution against infection.
23.他是山东人,这从他的口音可以听出来。
As can be recognized from his accent, he is from Shandong.
24.她正一动不动地躺在地板上。
She is lying motionless on the floor.
25.她气得直跺脚。
She was stamping with fury.

雅思写作高分范文:书信写作之日常信


You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Introduce yourself and tell her that you will be visiting her country during the summer vacation and suggest meeting her.(日常信)
亲爱的Sue:
你好吗?我从国际笔友那里获得的你的姓名和地址。很高兴给你写信并成为成为笔友。
Dear Sue,
How are you? I obtained your name and address from Pen Pal International. I am very glad to write to you and we become pen pals.
让我先介绍一下我自己:我目前在上海昂立托雅学院做英语(Q吧)教师。我1988年毕业于上海外国语大学,主修英语文学与语言学,并于1998年获得了语用学硕士学位。我喜欢拉二胡(一种中国乐器)和听流行音乐。我还对旅行感兴趣。噢,对了,我喜欢泡酒吧。
Let me first introduce myself. I’m currently working as an English teacher at Shanghai Onlytoya College. I graduated from Shanghai Foreign Languages University in 1988, majoring in English literature and linguistics. I got my Master’s degree in pragmatics in 1998. I like playing erhu (a kind of Chinese musical instrument) and listening to pop music. I am also very interested in traveling. Oh, yes, I am a great bar-goer!
这个夏天我将去澳大利亚。我要代表我们学院参加7月10-16日在悉尼的一个会议。会后,我计划在澳大利亚观光游览一番,可能有5天多的时间。如果你有时间,我很想与你本人见一面,或许可以一起吃个午饭。
This summer, I will be traveling to Australia. I will be attending a conference on behalf of my college in Sydney from July 10 to 16. After the conference, I plan to do some sightseeing in Australia, maybe five more days. If you are free, I would be very happy to meet you in person. Perhaps we could have lunch together.
好了,我就写到这里吧。我已经迫不及待地在等你的第一封信了。请告诉我你的情况以及你有什么兴趣。希望我们可以成为好朋友。
你真诚的
Kenny Gao
Well, let me finish here. I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter. Please tell me all about yourself and your interests. I hope we can become good friends.
Yours truly,
Kenny Gao

雅思写作考生必看的四个原则


主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before theexam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点……如此啰嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first,the second,the third,the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place,in the second place,in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点——精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!
比如:
I can not bear it.
可以用短语表达:I can not put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该只说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之类的形象词。

深度剖析雅思写作低分的原因


纵观考生雅思、托福写作的问题,主要失分点在于:
一、英语基本功差
主要反映在受汉语思维影响而导致词汇运用不当,句中动词使用混乱,句与句杂乱地混编在一起。
二、汉语翻译痕迹明显
有的句子恐怕只有中国人才能理解是什么意思,究其原因就是生硬地翻译了汉语表达方式。
三、套路化痕迹明显
很多老师授课过程中刻意突出写作套路,学生也千方百计背诵写作套路,导致展现在阅卷官面前的作文框架甚至很多语句千篇一律、如出一辙,从而极大地损害了得分。
四、通篇框架散乱
主要表现就是:总论点表达不清晰、分论点(主题句)支持不到位,甚至意思稚嫩。
怎么办?
练好基本功
英语基本功的打造固然需要时间去做积累,比如做到单词的恰当使用就绝非一朝一夕的事情;但是,具备了一定水平后,只要熟知某些基本规律,是可以让自己的书面表达发生质的变化的。
Part I:一个公式
我们都知道英语与汉语在表达顺序上存在很大的差异,因此,这里我们先引出一个英语表达顺序的公式来。请记住:英语的表达语序基本上遵循以下这个顺序:6-1-2-3-4-5-6,6(when)—1(who)—2(what)—3(whom)—4(how)—5(where)—6(when)
说明:6的位置很灵活,可以放前,也可以放后。
示例:
I ate an apple.
I ate an apple with a fork .
I ate an apple with a fork in the kitchen.
I ate an apple with a fork in the kitchen this morning.
以上四个句子从1-2-3模式一直到1-2-3-4-5-6模式,请大家逐个翻译一下,仔细对比英语顺序与汉语顺序的差异。
结论:英语和汉语在表达的最核心内容上是一致的:即一个句子的1-2-3是相同的;但是,在有了4-5-6后,汉语表达方式与英语这个自然表达顺序产生了巨大的词序差异:
汉语次信息先出现;英语主信息先出现。
再如:
我喜欢那个女孩子
我喜欢那个穿红衣服的女孩子
我喜欢那个穿红衣服的不喜欢我的女孩子
这三个句子的核心内容都是:I like that girl.(与:“我喜欢那个女孩子”词序一致,但是,在添加了其它部分后,表达顺序全变样了!)
再如:
我打死一只苍蝇
我用手打死一只苍蝇
我用手打了三次打死一只苍蝇
我用手打了三次并在我助理的帮助下打死了一只苍蝇
这四个句子的核心内容都是:I killed a fly .(与“我打死一只苍蝇”词序一致,但是,在添加了其它部分后,表达顺序全变样了!)
在一个句子的前面如果有内容,那么,请记住:
1.不到3个单词时,可以用逗号与后面句子分隔开来,也可以不用逗号分隔,具体情况根据说话人自己确定的停顿语气长短来确定。
示例1:At last (,) he stopped playing the piano .
示例2:Sadly (,) he picked up the broken glass and went into the room.
2.达到或超过3个单词时,必须用逗号与后面句子分隔开来。
示例1:In the end, I could not bear it.
示例2:To my surprise, he bought me a ticket!
Part III:1个main verb原则
理论上讲:一个句子只应该有一个为主的动词(即2)。
但是,实际运用的过程中,我们会发现一个句子中有多个动词,此时就需要:
标记清楚这些动词彼此间的逻辑关系!
这里的逻辑关系有两种情况:
1.并列(即:将这些动词视为地位相同;一般方式为使用and连接)
2.从属(即:牺牲某个或某些动词,将其处理成符合从属关系的方式,从而确保为主的动词只有一个;一般方式为使用动词三大非谓语形式:动词的ing形式、动词的过去分词形式、动词的不定式形式)
并列关系
示例1:I sat down beside her said nothing.
分析:sat与said之间没有标记逻辑关系,错误!可以添加and,形成并列关系,即:
I sat down beside her and said nothing.
示例2:I entered the room saw mother sit there wait for me come back.
分析:这里有5个动词,都没有标记逻辑关系,错误!通过分析,我们看到:entered和saw可以并列,因为它们拥有共同的1,即:I;sit和wait可以并列,因为它们拥有共同的1,即:mother,但这两组动词之间就不能再并列了,因为无法这么做。这就意味着:这句话里的动词有的可以并列,而有的不可以。
示例3:I opened the bag took out some paper and a pen, sat down started take notes.
分析:opened,took out,sat down,started这四个动词拥有共同的1,即:I,而且都是这个1直接行使或发出的动作,所以,可以采取并列关系;但take因为有个过渡层,而且在时态上也与其它动词处于不平衡状态,因此并列处理不合适。
从属关系
示例1:I sat down beside her said nothing.
分析:动词关系混乱,假如想确保sat,则需要牺牲后面的said,即:
I sat down beside her, saying nothing.
假如确保后面的said,则需牺牲前面的sat:
Sitting down beside her, I said nothing.
示例2:To quit smoking, I eat candies .
不定式常常用来表示目的。
Part IV:一个句子一个句号的原则
理论上讲,一个句子一个句号,但是,实际运用中会有几个甚至多个句子摆放在一起共享一个句号,此时应该怎么办呢?
答案很简单:标记清楚这些句子间的逻辑关系。有两种:
并列关系
示例1:I sat down beside her. I said nothing.
变为:I sat down beside her and I said nothing.
示例2:He asked me a question. I answered him.
变为:He asked me a question and I answered him.
从属关系
1)运用各类从句,形成主从符合句,主要包括:
状语从句
宾语从句
定语从句
主语从句
同位语从句
2)运用非谓语动词进行从属方式的处理。此时,部分句子的主要动词变成了动词的非谓语形式,致使整体的复杂句式变成了简单句式,主要手段就是按照规则进行了下列三种形态的变化:
动词的ing形式
动词的过去分词形式
动词不定式形式
从属关系示例(以状语从句为例)
示例1:When he asked me a question, I answered him.
示例2:I was so angry that I beat him up!
示例3:If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’!
示例4:Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest.
示例5:Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart.
示例6:Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you.
示例7:I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic.
非谓语动词方式处理示例
示例1:I sat beside her. I felt very nervous .
可变为:Sitting beside her, I felt very nervous.
或者:I sat beside her, feeling very nervous.
示例2:I want to quit smoking. I eat candies.
可变为:To quit smoking, I eat candies.
示例3:A young man was tired of sleeping on the floor. He saved up for years to buy a real bed.
可以变为:Tired of sleeping on the floor, a young man saved up for years to buy a real bed.
示例4:Jimmy was dressed up as Father Christmas. He was accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls. He set off down the main street of the city. He rode a baby elephant. The elephant was called Jumbo.
可以变为:Dressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls, Jimmy set off down the main street of the city, riding a baby elephant called Jumbo.
定语从句方式处理
定语从句当然是属于“从属”的行列,所以,是处理为从属方式的手段之一,而且用途极大。请看下面的例子:
This is the only book.
I read the book during the holiday.
两句的重合点在the book上面;将第二句中的the book抽出来,放到第一句book后面,其它内容向后甩。这样,我们就会看到the only book后面马上又在重复the book。为了避免重复,我们去掉the book,而换用另外一个词去替换,这个词就是定语从句中指物的which或that。因为这里的book有only在修饰,所以,最终我们选用that;又因为that在定语从句中作宾语,所以,可以省略。这样,两句就合并为:
This is the only book (that) I read during the holiday.
下面两句的合并遵循同样的原则:
She is the girl.
The girl’s father is my boss.
èShe is the girl the girl’s father is my bossè
She is the girl who (’s) father is my boss.
èShe is the girl whose father is my boss.
结束语:
这些内容貌似简单,其实恰恰是高水平阶段常犯的错误,非常令人费解。我辅导了多位从国外留学归来再参加雅思与托福考试的同学,包括在国外学习了8年之久的,可惜,还是频频“违规”。

八类雅思写作常用简单句整理


由于分析角度不同,不同语法书对英语句子的划分也相应有不同的分类。在此笔者主要根据雅思写作的需要,从句子结构的角度讲解集中类型的句子。按结构划分,句子可以分为简单句(simple),并列句(compound),复合句(complex),和并列复合句(compound-cmplex)等。
简单句
一个独立的句子,如果只有一个主语(可以是并列主语)和一个谓语(可以是并列谓语),这样的句子就称为简单句。简单句只能有一个主语和谓语,但是可以包含不止一个宾语、定语或状语。
1 We should ( ).
我们应该(弘扬民族文化)。
2 Few people can ( ).
很少人能(抵挡住毒品的诱惑)。
3 The advertisement is ( ).
该广告(误导人和夸大其辞)。
4 The direct cause of drug-taking is ( ).
吸毒的直接原因是(无知和好奇)。
5 The ( ) the repaidly expanding population and economic development.
(反对方把环境的恶化归咎于)人口的迅速增长和经济的快速发展。
6 The number of TV audience ( ) of 20,000 at 9 pm.
电视观众的人数在9点(达到最高点),为2万人。
7 Animal testing ( ).
动物实验(侵犯了动物的生存权利)。
8 Traveling abroad ( ).
出国旅游(开阔视野、丰富知识和培养独立性)。
Key:
1 carry forward our national culture
2 resist the temptation of drugs
3 misguiding and exaggerative
4 ignorance and curiosity
5 opponents attribute the deterioration of environment to
6 reaches a peak
7 violates animals’ right of subsistence
8 broadens one’s vision, enriches one’s mind and cultivates independence

雅思写作中应注意避免性别歧视


近四十年来,尽管非性别歧视语还没有达到非不可的程度,但它毕竟已进人日常会话和写作的主流之中。随便翻开一张英美的报纸,或瞧一下五花八门的宣传广告,就会发现supervisor(工头,领班)替代了原来的foreman, workman‘s compensation(工人赔偿金)变成了worker‘s compensation; sales rep, sales associate或seller(推销员)取代了常用词salesman等。为此,笔者将有关资料整理如下,供英语学习者参考。请注意,所选用的例句,除个别注明外,均选自Rosalie Maggio编写的The Nonselist Word Finder: A Dictionary of Gender-Free Usage (Maggio, 1989)。
1.尽量不用通性代词he,除了明确地指代一个男性人物时,都要设法避免使用之。可以根据语境需要,选用下列替换方式:
采用复数形式:
Sexist: When bathing a baby, never leave him unattended.
Revised: When bathing babies, never leave them unattended.
给婴儿洗澡时,一定不能让他们无人照料。
2) 用we/us/our改写原句:
Sexist:From each according to his abilities, to each according to his needs.
Revised:From each of us according to our abilities, to each of us according to our needs.

雅思写作必背经典佳句21句


According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病.
The latest surveys show that Quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感.
No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评.
People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.
人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实.
Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康.
Nowadays ,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.
当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈.然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历.
In view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施.
Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响.
An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city .However ,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents ,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.
越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用.然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,象犯罪和卖淫.
Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus ,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客.
There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem :the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它.
An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休.
A proper part-time job does not occupy student’s too much time .In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study .As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻.
Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.
任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价.
An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束.
When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习.
The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.
It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.
无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冬的痛苦生活.
Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点任何年龄进行.
No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.
没有人能否人这一事实:教育是人生最重要的一方面.
People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer .
人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论.