Universities should accept/enrol equal numbers of male and female students for every subject.
Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Nowadays,the proportion
of male and female students in some subjects of universities is not
equal , and the male students often take a larger proportion in it .To
the problem(?), some persons think that most subjects should not accept
the balance numbers of male and female's. I am,and probably will always
be ,one of those who argue that it is a sensible phenomenon(practice)
that the balanced proportion exists in every subject.To support my
ideas(viewpoint), I can take for the next following items.
BODY1
The most important
reason is the improved position of the female. Traditionally,women were
considered to do most of houseworks(housework) in the family. As a
result, many universities give less priority to the female students
.Now,the obvious change has spreaded(spread) in every section of the
life.Females in most countries have gained the equal position
comparing(compared)with the male.Without sex discrimination ,the
feminism should involve the traditional system of education. Those
curriculums more sex-oriented must be turned into a new situation : it
should provide the equal amount for female students. BODY2 Another equal
point(?) is the excellent ability from female(s). Nowadays, women have
shown their distinct
ablities in many fields, which are
traditionally thought to only cater for the male. The female's
advantages,such as the earnest and careful attitude(manners), can
greatly benefit them in the competitions with male(s). For example,
now,it appears many superb female scientists and politicans(many superb
women have shown up on scientific and political arenas).To this modern
fashion, I think that (the)university should change the unequal
porportion in the subjects in case of leading to a(n) unfavorable
situation.
However, some persons believe that a few
of(deleted) subjects should belong to men and they can take them as own
fields to be closed to females. To their ridiculous thoughts,I think
that these male's subjects can be enrolled in few female students at
first(?) . Gradually, time is the best facility that can tell those
persons the correct answer.
To sum up, in the future, I believe that the
porportion in some subjects of universities will be equal. The life will
be magenificient(?) and develop to a hgher lever(?) because of the more
and more
severe competition in every field from the two sexual persons.
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